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Hey I think the artwork was great! The animation definitely looked cutout. I wouldn't have had Donkey Kong have a speech bubble. The animation wasn't bad but it could have been better with more smoother movements. For the mouth graphics you should have added a F- sound mouth at least. And more eye blinks and movements would have took this animation a bit farther. Over all it wasn't bad! Keep it up!

Taliwacky responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I will use it to improve. I also feel I could of spent more time on the movement and animation. But after having it on the back burner for so long I wanted to just get it out. Thanks for taking the time to watch and review.

This was pretty damn good

OMG

This was good!

Awesome!

Outstanding Job

Soooo Obama is a demon. meh

First I have to say that this was not funny at all... just a bunch of yelling about soup with no worthy punch line. The drawings/animation were not very good at all. The animation movements were very static.

Pros: You put out an effort to animate it.

Cons: static animation, bland script, drawings, voice acting, audio mastering and there were never a tone set to keep the audience engaged at all.

StephenTheCreeper7 responds:

I understand your criticism about the animation, I rushed it, it turned out choppy. Then again, it was my first attempt at animating. But, in case you didn't know, I didn't write this XD. Read the description.

Our goal is to make people laugh while telling a story and exploring the uncomfortable truths and taboos along the way. If you are looking for funny videos and animation shorts then look no farther. Don't let your kids watch this!

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